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Tobi
Mar 17, 2008 17:44:12 GMT -5
Post by ~Kaguya on Mar 17, 2008 17:44:12 GMT -5
OOC [/b] Your name: Sam Your gender: m Contact: Email General[/b] Name: Tobi Nickname/Alias: Dobe, Bakayarou Gender: m Age: 21 Blood-type: A Organization: Akatsuki City: Konohagakure no Sato Grade/Job: Arbys worker / College: Sophmore Pet: no History: Not Much is known about Tobi's actual past as a child. But he joined the Akatsuki after Sasori died. After the death of the puppet, Tobi took his ring, and eventually joined. As he joined, he gained the partner Deidara. Although Deidara might not like the way Tobi acts, Kisame finds it amusing.
While coming across, a group of Konoha nin, Tobi reveals that he is Madara Uchiha, The founder of the Uchiha clan, and that "Tobi" is a mere distraction to cover up the true genius inside. Tobi is not Madara... Madara is Tobi O.o;;
Other: No Medical Conditions: No Appearance[/b] Reference Pic: i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff295/SaidreIA/Naruto/Akatsuki/Tobi/1155830877.jpg Hair: Tobi hair is short. Not exactly spiked, but not styled. "messy" as some may put it.. Eyes: Tobi has two Sharingan eyes, although his mask may only show one.. Summary: Tobi, when not wearing his school uniform, is wearing his akatsuki robe, that covers the bottom of his face. He has two Sharingan eyes, although his mask may only show one. You can not see his face, due to the mask, but he does have messy, black hair. Other: Hi Personality[/b] Inside: Tobi, to himself, may act like the goof he pretends to be, or he may be planning as Madara. Outside: Tobi, outside and revealed to everyone, acts like a goof, and is bothersome to his sempai. General: Tobi could be acting like Madara, his true self, or he could be acting like Tobi, the goof that he acts to be. Weakness: Two personalities Strengths: Smarts Organization Aspirations: To keep his true self hidden Favorite food: Whatever will fit through his mask.. x] Hated food: Sushi Can't stand: Tobi hates it when people call him a moron. Cannon CharactersRoleplay Example: "Welcome to the good burger, home of the good burger, can i take your order?!" Tobi shouted to a customer across the room. Deidara immidietly pushed him out've the way. Tobi walked back to the roast beed machine, and slammed his face up against the glass, slowly watching it cook. Five minutes later, the beef was browned, and tobi gasped in awe. "DEIDARAAAAA! THIS FOOD IS MAGIC!" He screamed over to him. Deidara slowly walked over. "Tobi, your a moron." Deidara said with a short sigh. "Deidara Sempai, will you go out with Tobi?" He asked.[/center]
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Tobi
Mar 17, 2008 18:30:23 GMT -5
Post by Jazzy on Mar 17, 2008 18:30:23 GMT -5
Accepted -grins-
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Izumi, Yin
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Tobi
Mar 17, 2008 21:41:58 GMT -5
Post by Izumi, Yin on Mar 17, 2008 21:41:58 GMT -5
Okies, I would call for a re-edit on this. I don't mean to rain on his parade or anything, but...there's...just a lot of it that bothers the crap out of me.
1. Way.too.short. and with inaccurate information. ><;; The shortness is killing me...seriously. A few sentences for appearance? >< I can write a 500 word summary for Tobi's appearance! There should be so much more then just like...2 sentences. At least 5 lines or even sentances! Also, Tobi's hair is black not brown, black. And Tobi has both eyes, that are black. If this were Naruto-included, I would tell you he had the full powered up sharingan!
2. Tobi is not a retard, he's the Akatsuki mastermind for christs sake. He's above Pein and, in this rp, would be the leader of whole gang (in secret.) Also, personality in the general section is too short in my opinion. Tobi has pretty much 2 sides to him, when he's alone or with Pein (meaning he acts serious and intelligent) and when around the others (classic goofy, but not a retard) He's not an oblivious idiot, he just pretends to be. He's also not gay...It's too OOC, even for the likes of Tobi.
3. His history has inaccurate parts to it, Madara was the one who tore his brother's eyes out. It wasn't vice versa. <o< He needed the eyes because his were slowly going blind.
And that's my review since I'm gonna cut myself back. Sorry if I sounded rude or anything, but I had to state my thoughts or else I was gonna explode on Wulfy and rant...xD;;
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Tobi
Mar 17, 2008 21:45:05 GMT -5
Post by ~Kaguya on Mar 17, 2008 21:45:05 GMT -5
x.x Seriously, dont be jealous just cause i got to him first... Impluss, Jazzeh is the admin, so im following her lead. AND! I Might not want him how you had him in SD. -.o;; Tobeh, you know Sanneh made her history up, too?
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Tobi
Mar 17, 2008 21:47:12 GMT -5
Post by Izumi, Yin on Mar 17, 2008 21:47:12 GMT -5
I'm not jelous, I'm doing something to help Tobi be more cannon. I had Tobi totally different on SD because not much was known for him. But so much more has been discovered and Tobi deserves better. He deserves a more cannon-like self. You can't take a cannon character and totally screw around with their history and stuff. You have to keep it along the lines of how the real creator made the character, or it's not that character at all!
Also, since you've said that. Deidara's history was never revealed in the manga. We know a little about how he got drafted into Akatsuki and that he lived in Iwa, we know much more about Tobi.
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Tobi
Mar 17, 2008 21:48:35 GMT -5
Post by ~Kaguya on Mar 17, 2008 21:48:35 GMT -5
x.x Why are you dogging on me? SANNEH DID THE SAME THING! SHE HELPED ME WITH THIS!
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Tobi
Mar 17, 2008 21:52:00 GMT -5
Post by Izumi, Yin on Mar 17, 2008 21:52:00 GMT -5
I just told you Deidara's history was never revealed. He's more a mystery then Tobi. Have her help you more! Sanny is a great rper and I know she is capable of helping you make your descriptions at least a few more sentences longer. Also, her information was rather accurate from what we know about Mr. Dei. I'm not picking on you, I reviewed my opinions on things like a staff member would do. I'm not exactly a staff here, but I have much experience and this is exactly what I'd tell you if you were on my site applying.
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Tobi
Mar 17, 2008 21:56:41 GMT -5
Post by ~Kaguya on Mar 17, 2008 21:56:41 GMT -5
God I hate when people do this. It's so annoying. x.x And, some of it was a joke. When i said anything about retard, I was trying to be funny. x.x Obviously to you it wasn't.
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Tobi
Mar 17, 2008 22:51:57 GMT -5
Post by Izumi, Yin on Mar 17, 2008 22:51:57 GMT -5
Alright, tis much better now. ~<3 -is satisfied-
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Tobi
Mar 17, 2008 23:02:22 GMT -5
Post by ~Kaguya on Mar 17, 2008 23:02:22 GMT -5
Bueno........
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